?

Log in

No account? Create an account
 
 
03 August 2011 @ 02:01 am
Fic: ‘She waits.’  
Title: She waits.
Fandom: Doctor Who.
Rating: (G)
Time Period: During season 5, episode 1: The Eleventh Hour (modern series)
Summary: Amelia waits.

Author's Note: This is quick ‘n’ dirty (for definition see the F. A. Q.).

On the pure faith of a raggedy dressed man and his blue box, a child waited. I liked this moment and felt I should write it; after all, she waited all night.


Disclaimer
All characters contained herein are the intellectual property of the BBC & Steven Moffat; I am not affiliated with nor endorsed by them.


_______________________


Sitting on the suitcase, her chin in her hand, she waits. After a small while, she crosses her arms and lays them on her knees. Overhead, the stars spin and the moon shines.

And she waits.

The red of her beanie shines in the pale light; a beacon of bright colour in the dark. She sighs, her eyes threatening to close and she wrenches her eyes open.

And she waits.

On this night, she cannot sleep in case the Raggedy Doctor returns. He said he would and so she waits. She doesn’t know why but she doesn’t question her patience. He had a swimming pool in the library and engines in his blue box.

The Raggedy Doctor and his blue box. He said to trust him. That he was the Doctor and did he look like people?

It’s been longer than five minutes but she waits.
 
 
 
     Mandy: Eleven - Big Flashy Thing and a Crayona_phoenixdragon on August 3rd, 2011 01:23 am (UTC)

Poor little Amelia..this was wonderful, thank you!

*hugs*
F. J.: Lantern & Candles: Warmmorethanacandle on August 3rd, 2011 11:36 am (UTC)
-hug.- You're very welcome!
Armchair DM: Igor: Joy! Joy! Joy! Joy!armchairdm on August 3rd, 2011 02:13 pm (UTC)
Very awesome. I think it's harder to get into Amelia's head than Amy's and you've done a great job.
F. J.: Lanterns: Warmmorethanacandle on August 3rd, 2011 03:27 pm (UTC)
I think it's harder to get into Amelia's head than Amy's and you've done a great job.
How so?
Armchair DM: Igor: A Rod Of Silencearmchairdm on August 5th, 2011 12:59 pm (UTC)
There's more about Amy for starters; and writing for kids I always think is hard. Amy in some respects is quite predictable - it's all about Rory; whether she's accepting or fighting against that.
F. J.: Lanterns: Warmmorethanacandle on August 5th, 2011 02:18 pm (UTC)
There's a lot of information about Amelia in the Amy episodes.

writing for kids I always think is hard.
Really?